Starting off these decks aren't for any kind of competition just casual play with friends and whoever else I may meet at the local shop or college.
I have two decks I am working on. One has been built while the other is still in the bought building stages. I have a Kor deck which has been built and just needs some fine tuning and then a Vampire deck which I am trying to work into a finished product to build. Ok then shall we get into the first deck, the Kor.
Creatures:
3-Armament Master
3-Kazandu Blademaster
3-Kor Duelist
3-Kor Outfitter
2-Kor Aeronaut
2-Kor Sanctifiers
2-Kor Skyfisher
2-Steppe Lynx
Spells/Artifacts:
4-Grappling Hook
3-whispersilk Cloak
3-Trusty Machete
2-Magebane Armor
2-Explorer's Scope
2-Bone Saw
2-Conqueror's Pledge
Land:
20 Plains
2 Emeria, Sky Ruin
After writing this deck out it just pops out to me as having some weird flaws. To me it seems I just need to take out the Blademasters and put in something else. I'm not sure if I should up the Steppe Lynx to 4 or just leave it. I feel like I need to either do that or put trade the Blademasters for Stoneforge Mystic.
The artifact equipment just don't seem right to me either. I feel as if the Grappling Hooks should just go and be replaced with somehing else such as adding in 2 more Bonesaws. Other equipment I have thought about adding are Basilisk Collars, Golem-Skin Gauntlets, and Cranial Plating. I feel as if I should just be focusing on lower cost equipments to quickly boost my other Kor.
Last for the Kor deck is the sideboard. Right now I really don't have one and was unsure of what to add to it. Was thinking of including Kor Cartographers and Kor Firewalkers. Also thought I might want Devout Lightcaster in there. Last to maybe add is Path to Exile or Oblivion Ring.
Ok now for the vampire deck that is only pseudobuilt.
Creatures/Planeswalker:
4-Vampire Nighthawk
4-Vampire Lacerator
4-Guul Draz Vampire
4-Blood Seeker
4-Bloodghast
2-Vampire Hexmage
2-Ascendant Evincar
2-Gatekeeper of Malakir
2-Kalastria Highborn
2-Sorin Markov
Spells/Artifacts:
4-Dark Ritual
2-Doom Blade
2-Unearth
2-Blade of the Bloodchief
Land:
20-Swamp
Starting right off I know I have no Nocturnus in there. Right now I am not worrying about him simply cause I don't feel like shelling out the money for him. The $40 that would be spent on him could pretty much build the rest of the deck. In time I will get to collecting him.
Now with the actual deck. First off the 20 swamp seems like it should be changed. Maybe leave the 20 but add in some stuff to search. However, just running test hands and turns I rarely had mana trouble with 1 and 2 cost creatures and the dark rituals. Next, I wonder about the choice of spells and whether I should add more Doom Blades and get rid of the Uneartha in the deck and throw them into a sideboard.
Now onto the creatures. I think I mitt be spreading myself a little thin with the amount of just 2 creatures I have. Not sure what ones I should take out either. Maybe the Evincar's and maybe add in 2 more Gatekeepers. The side deck that I don't have really figured out I was think of keeping BloodWitches and Pulse Trackers in it. Maybe Nirkanq Revenants, bubthen again I don't have much mana problems. Not sure what else creature wise or spell wise to include in the side.
Not expecting anyone to truly read through my walls of text, but thanks to anyone that is willing to try and help me polish one deck to shine and help shape the other inti workable material.