whats wrong with this card? (new create a card game)

[sonicshield]

In this game you make a card is wrong or doesnt make sense rulewise. Users have to determine whats wrong with the card. This game can help newbies learn about the rules.

If you are a judge or know the rules very well or something then most likely it will be easy for you to spot whats wrong with the card - so dont answer in this case, but feel free to post cards of your own. there can be many cards posted at same time you dont have to wait for someone to answer earlier cards. when answering, quote the card (s) you are answering about.

Here is an example:

Energizing Liquid 2WW
Instant
Target creature with protection from white gains +5/+5 and first strike.

The answer to whats wrong the card above is that since Energizing Liquid is white itself, it cannot target a creature with protection from white.


ok so here is one:

Blue lightning 1U
Sorcery
Counter target spell. If a spell was countered this way, target creature an opponent control gains protection from blue until end of turn.

[Crocodile]

interesting game,

here is one. This is the red counterpart to taunting elf

Taunging Goblin R
Creature - Goblin
All creatures able to attack taunting goblin do so
0/1

[Togepi]

Blue lightning 1U
Sorcery
Counter target spell. If a spell was countered this way, target creature an opponent control gains protection from blue until end of turn.

thats easy like with that ohter card since this card is blue it cant give creature protection from blue since then its targetting an illegal target

[sonicshield]

no its not that, because when blue lightning resolves the creature is a legal target (assuming it didnt already have protection from blue) so there's no problem with blue lightning giving that creature protection from blue.

keep trying though...

[Arix]

Counterspells don't work as sorceries. Simple.

[sonicshield]

yep you got it

Sorceries can only be cast on your turn, and when the stack is empty. and a spell cant target itself. So there is no way to cast a counterspell as a sorcery

[vacation]

interesting game,

here is one. This is the red counterpart to taunting elf

Taunging Goblin R
Creature - Goblin
All creatures able to attack taunting goblin do so
0/1

you cant attack creatures

[sonicshield]

A couple more (these might be a bit harder)

Lunatic Warrior 1RB
Creature - Human Soldier
When lunatic warrior enters the battlefield, target player discards 3 cards and you lose 3 life
T: The next sorcery spell you cast this turn can't be countered
1/3


Look into the future XUU
Instant
Reveal the top X cards from your library. You may put a card from among them with converted mana X into the battlefield. Then remove from the game the rest of the cards revealed this way.

[Ditto]

Arctic Beach
Land
When you cast Arctic Beach, you may return two target land cards you control from the battlefield to your hand. If you don't, sacrifice Arctic Beach.
T: Add U, W, or G to your mana pool

[Togepi]

ok i'll try a riddle too

spinning monster 6
creature elemental
when spinning monster comes into play choose a color
if you chose red, spinning monster has haste
if you chose blue, spinning monster has shroud
if you chose green, spinning moster has +2/+2
if you chose black, spinning monster has deathtouch
if you chose white, spinning monster has lifelink
if you chose colorless, spinning moster has trample
6/6

[Togepi]

i guess noone knows the answer, it was that colorless is not a color... all the other abilities i put many of them to distract you from the incorrect one

[computer]

recuperation 1WGG
enchantment
whenever a creature you control reaches negative toughness, you may pay 1. If you do, regenerate that creature.

[Chodie]

Energizing Liquid 2WW
Instant
Target creature with protection from white gains +5/+5 and first strike.

Since nobodies said anything... I'll point it out. The card IS white, it can't target a creature with protection from white.
I knew you liked to nitpick, but to actually start a thread to make people notice their mistakes with creating cards? WOW!!!

[Chodie]

recuperation 1WGG
enchantment
whenever a creature you control reaches negative toughness, you may pay 1. If you do, regenerate that creature.

Once a creature has a toughness less than zero, it's destroyed anyway, so it's pointless to say negative.

[Chodie]

Arctic Beach
Land
When you cast Arctic Beach, you may return two target land cards you control from the battlefield to your hand. If you don't, sacrifice Arctic Beach.
T: Add U, W, or G to your mana pool

You don't cast a land... PIE!!!

[Chodie]

Look into the future XUU
Instant
Reveal the top X cards from your library. You may put a card from among them with converted mana X into the battlefield. Then remove from the game the rest of the cards revealed this way.

If the card is an instant or sorcery, THEN it would be wrong. Instants and Sorceries never enter the battlefield.

[Chodie]

Mind Blow
BU
Sorcery
You can only cast Mind Blow when you are being attacked.
Target player discards 20 cards from their library.

[Peter99]

Mind Blow
BU
Sorcery
You can only cast Mind Blow when you are being attacked.
Target player discards 20 cards from their library.

Is it that you cannot cast sorcery when in attack stage?

[Chodie]

Secretly, there were two problems. Hehehe, I'm so clever.

[sonicshield]

Since nobodies said anything... I'll point it out. The card IS white, it can't target a creature with protection from white.

you're right, but actually that card was just for example, I gave the answer myself in the first post

Once a creature has a toughness less than zero, it's destroyed anyway, so it's pointless to say negative.

mmm not sure what you mean

If the card is an instant or sorcery, THEN it would be wrong. Instants and Sorceries never enter the battlefield.

Yep you're right. cards that say to put something into the battlefield always specify someting like "permanent card" or "creature card" or "land card". see for example Growth Spasm or Wild Pair